M/s. MAAX STAR SOLAR SYSTEMS

 

Specificity: Adds specifics like "selling solar panels" and "residential rooftop installations to large-scale commercial projects."
Benefits Emphasized: Highlights the practical benefits of solar energy (lower bills, increased property value).
Stronger Language: Uses more impactful words like "promise," "partner," and "dedicated."
Target Audience Consideration: Speaks to both individuals and communities.